by Nil Sep 14, 2014
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
Silver whispers caress the drums |
by BlueJay
I feel like this piece would benefit from a little bit of punctuation. Just because the format made it difficult to establish a sense of fluidity or rhythm. I love how the first thing you wrote was an image that personified so many different meanings, that was a great use of skill. And the fact that so much can be interpreted or such countless results can occur from reading this was amazing. |