I feel like this piece would benefit from a little bit of punctuation. Just because the format made it difficult to establish a sense of fluidity or rhythm. I love how the first thing you wrote was an image that personified so many different meanings, that was a great use of skill. And the fact that so much can be interpreted or such countless results can occur from reading this was amazing.

I've read through a pretty good chunk of your works, but this one speaks the most to me. This is the one with the most skill so far. Nicely done.