Love reading through this! I feel like you've written other poems with the shore and ocean personified or the main theme. It's always refreshing to have dialogue in a piece as well, and I do see a life lesson in this. A lesson on time even. |
by Meena Krish
The shore and the ocean though joined together each one have its own beauty and story. I like how you have given them character and voice, bringing out feelings which we humans have and share. An interesting write filled with emotions...nicely penned! |
Nicely penned with great depth. |