by Hellon Sep 19, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
A dry flower falls |
by mossgirl19
Ms. Hellon, I love your haikus and senryus very much! |
by Ben Pickard
What an evocative little piece, Hellon. Well written, as ever! |
by gumshuda
Oh wow what a short sweet poem.... |
by Liz
I'm absolutely in love with this. With just these few words you've managed to create a whole scene. A lifetime, really. Just picturing when the flower was first given/put there, when the Bible was, perhaps, still new. You leave the reader wondering who the Bible/flower belonged to. A loved one? Mother? Grandmother? Lover or sibling? |
by uttAm
Excellent! |