Comments : It cant end like this

  • 10 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    You put it down and let it fade to inhale the waves of the purple blue and snow white hehhe :) nice one

  • 10 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    I was looking for more at the end but this is good.

    • 10 years ago

      by lori

      What do you mean more at the end? how can i make it better?

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Lori,

    Good write. Sometimes love isn't meant to be and we unfortunately lose the fight.

    Em