by Augastus Black
This poem is just Unique....wow..Nicely written with full care and respected words. It teaches us that life is beautiful....everyone should enjoy living it. You are on your way of becoming a great poet. |
Thank you so much :-) although I must say, that's the funny thing with poetry, people often have many different interpretations, when I wrote this I was actually very depressed and was being sarcastic about life, it was more a cynical poem than a poem about life's beauty :-) |
by Ben Pickard
Got to be honest, I saw the sarcasm inherent throughout! Very good piece about the hardships of simply living |