Comments : Everyday Pain

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Oh wowwww..... Love this poem.... Emotions flow perfectly throughout the entire piece....

    I love these lines especially....

    I try to escape from me like Sun hiding in its own shadow
    With every tear going down your cheeks creating never ending pain....

    Wonderfully written....

    • 9 years ago

      by Nanda

      Thank You!!

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wow such a deep, emotion filled poem full of wonderful imagery and descriptives. I love how you describe the tests making the blood disappeared but not help.

    The last line was like a kick in the teeth which many of us can relate to.

    Em