by Dancing Rivers Sep 23, 2014
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Listen to the sound, of the shattered glass. |
by VYXSIN
Thanks for such a beautiful and emotional poem. it explains how i feel very well at the moment. the flow is great. keep it up |
Thank you Sarah,I appreciate that a lot, stay strong honey and keep writing, also may I just make a suggestion?I think that your poem"child abuse"should rather go under explicit,as it deals with sensitive subject matter,I must say that it was a shockingly beautiful poem, and that I can relate in part, though not entirely, ti the events that occurred, also if you don't mind my asking, is it a personal, experienced poem or just a random poem? |
by Maple Tree
You have a gift Hazel of letting your emotions flow and as we talked about erlier, the nature tones in your poem are breathtaking.... |
Thank you Andrea :-) this is a poem I wrote about someone very very special who broke my heart spirits and soul,yet somehow managed to fix them up again... |