by Dancing Rivers Sep 24, 2014
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Ah! This delightful kiss, |
Your lines here are so elegant, and I love the gentleness of this nature poem. My only suggestion would be to not capitalize the start of each line if you are just continuing the thought, such as in the sixth line in your first stanza. But that's up to you as the writer. |
by ddavidd
This too |