by charli Sep 24, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Her hair is tied in a fishtail braid. |
Hey charli, pretty good but sad poem.very good though how you used two contrasting emotions (calm Serenity and depression and suicide), ok that's more than two, but anyway, these contrasting emotions, the way your words flowed from one mood to the next was flawless and seemless,I congratulate you on that :-) |
by dindee
Hi there... =) |
by charli
Thanks <3 |