Praise the director

by Dancing Rivers   Sep 25, 2014


In God"s theatre-nature-I sit
contemplating the wonder
of the grand spectacle before me.

Every bird has a solo,
a duet and accompaniment.
Every insect, more graceful than Odette.

The trees-a backdrop of perfection,
No Davinci works could compare-
Nor Michelangelo this beauty surpass.

As a member of the audience,
I sit with the heavenly hosts,
And watch the play progress-

Into a wondrous climax-
Of heavenly praise.
The final scene-the sunset,

Has the audience,
gripped with pure amazement,
At the masterpiece

The curtain falls,
The audience sighs
Praise to the director-Jehovah

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  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Were you happier with God here, Hazel? lol
    Aside from that, what a beautiful, beautiful piece. Some of your wording here and imagery conjured are of the highest order. One of my favourites I've read from you.
    "Every bird has a solo, a duet and accompaniment" - brilliant.

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thanks bennie haha yeah i was hey, chiiling in my garden feeling all holy haha. thanks man that means a lot :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thanks bennie haha yeah i was hey, chiiling in my garden feeling all holy haha. thanks man that means a lot :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thanks bennie haha yeah i was hey, chiiling in my garden feeling all holy haha. thanks man that means a lot :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thanks bennie haha yeah i was hey, chiiling in my garden feeling all holy haha. thanks man that means a lot :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thanks bennie haha yeah i was hey, chiiling in my garden feeling all holy haha. thanks man that means a lot :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thanks bennie haha yeah i was hey, chiiling in my garden feeling all holy haha. thanks man that means a lot :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thanks bennie haha yeah i was hey, chiiling in my garden feeling all holy haha. thanks man that means a lot :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thanks bennie haha yeah i was hey, chiiling in my garden feeling all holy haha. thanks man that means a lot :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thanks bennie haha yeah i was hey, chiiling in my garden feeling all holy haha. thanks man that means a lot :)

    • 9 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Thanks bennie haha yeah i was hey, chiiling in my garden feeling all holy haha. thanks man that means a lot :)

  • 10 years ago

    by ddavidd

    I nominated this one

    • 10 years ago

      by Dancing Rivers

      Really? Thank you so much!!!! :-) I really appreciate that :-) wow I'm surprised to be honest,I wrote this in a few minutes when I was bored and sitting in the lounge wishing I was in the garden :-P

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