Anonymous

A catchy little piece, well written

Very clever wording that's deeper than what meets the average eyes

The only thing I would have done differently

"Big brother is watching,
Little sister close your eyes.
Anonymous can find me here,
While mason softly cries.
Illuminate; with false light,
While the darkness here is real,
I can give you proof of all of this...
but none of how I feel. "

would help the reader with the intended breaks

I wish I could nominate this tooo !!! 5/5

Hungry for? Food? Of what source?

That's a good question. I'm kind of hungry right now...?