Wild swirling gale,
intoxicate my being.
nefarious nymph,
dancing 'round me mockingly,
you enchant my soul.

Dreamy opening. A true fairytale of nature in this first stanza. It is very vivid and metaphorically beautiful. I love the description of the wind intoxicating you, it's so surreal and I can relate. It's beautiful and a breath of fresh air, surrounding you and hugging you as it twirls away. The words you used are deep to and is uniquely used, I like the enchantment of the soul, how the nymph is like putting you under a spell, a nature spell. :p

Eagerly I follow you-
charmed by your lovely
smile.I spread my wings, and
throw me willingly,
at your feet in ecstasy-
crying for the love-
your sweet caress folds me in.

I love it. I can almost envision you as a fairy. Or your arms being your wings as you spread them against the beautiful ecstasy of nature and how it just totally engulfs you. Real strong write. very fun and enjoyable read. makes me want to go be in nature.