Comments : Let's Pretend

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I really like the honesty in this piece and they way your voice shines through this write. Amazing job. Beautifully heartbreaking piece. Probably one of my favorites from you so far, greatly penned!

    • 10 years ago

      by Kakera

      Thank you! I'm quite happy with it despite it being a makeshift poem written for Saffie's challenge, LOL. It seems in general that my poetry has to be either very bleak, or about love, for them to reach their heights. Hahaha.