I think this isn't so much a condemnation of hypocrites, but rather an acceptance of one's frail, futile humanity.I love the ending paragraph,I won't quote it as I'm sure you can read for yourself your own words, but there is such an intense feeling of pure, sheer acceptance, acceptance of one's sinful human nature gained in birth, by the blood and sins of our fathers.I must say, that in this case Joseph, for the simple reason that I too have come to an acceptance of my fate,I have to agree withkakera's point of view. |
by Kakera
This is exactly what I was talking about when I tested this poem for a test audience before submitting it. I intended it to be written in a way that the reader herself only truly understands what it means, because there is no true meaning set in stone. |
Wow that's actually really incredible, you did am amazing job with playing with our minds (but that's not what you were doing, no, saying you were playing with our minds is to mediocre for this poem) you were making us dig deep, stop and think about what we're reading, what the base meaning could possibly be, and what the meaning is personally, to the reader.what an amazing piece!!# |