A beautiful write Wednesday, so much raw, unedited emotion that really strikes the soul, your dialogue format has been flawlessly executed, very well done :-)

Great work, so emotional. I really like the repitition that u have used throughout, and it also flows very well. Keep it up.

There was a lot of grammar errors like punctuation, spelling and with that over with I will get back to the fact I like the meaning of the poem trust me I do like this poem I just am not a big fan of the beginning since it keeps on repeating and I know every poet doesn't have to keep on repeating the same part because it kind of makes it less valuable I still see this poem with talent just make this poem more elegant and it has elegance just not as much as it should. The ending made me sad since it is a tribute to someone that you loved and that person is now dead which I am sorry and beautiful poem with some errors 5/5

-Mori