Comments : The dream of hidden codes

  • 10 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Close your eyes and walk with me in my very own realm of dreams...

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    Beautiful entry into this poem, lovely use of words and an enchanting warm invite.

    Stories will be told and answers will be revealed in metaphorical codes of mystery.

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    Amazing usage of words again. I like the underlining meaning behind this, it's full of secrets and a deep level of trying to understand a dream you described it well here..

    Be the voice in the silent world,
    Say the words that have never been told.

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    I like this it is kind of like your subconscious is speaking to you within your dreams opening up a gateway into a world and life you are trying to discover.

    Free yourself from the chains of lies and misery, And be the person you truly want to be.

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    Awesome message here, it's a true statement something that many people forget to do is be themselves and life their life the way they want. The message above is clear, no metaphors, no code words.. Very clear cut and truly inspiring.

    See through the blind eyes of fate and open the many closed doors embedded within a dark and ancient page...

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    I felt like you were talking about your third eye here. The blind eye.. The subconscious mind is usually suppressed by ourselves and our minds but it's like you are speaking about opening up your true eyes to the beauty of who you are and the world. No more falsely being someone who you don't want to be.

    Weave yourself safe in the complex webs of your mind and complete the journey established in your destiny's design.

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    YES! This is so powerful and true here. I love the usage of words here. To weave yourself safe in the complex webs of our minds to discover who we are within these dreams that are trying to guide us into self discovery. Awesome metaphor.

    Cure the wounds bleeding your heart and soul;
    free yourself from the tormenting voices of old.

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    This one is powerful to me because so many times I hold on to the scars of yesterday instead of trying to focus on the present and future. This stanza speaks volumes to me. To let go, move on, and do only what I am capable of doing..

    Run through the vast fields of creativity where musical rhythms are the key to the cold icy heart of sorrow and misery.

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    Lovely, music really is soothing and has saved so many of us from misery and sorrow. I can vouch for that and this stanza has a great message of the love and power that music has over us. Music is the language of the universe we all can relate to some type and it brings so many of us together. Your stanza is strong and really brings forth the importance of what music has upon our minds and souls.

    Over rocky cliffs of vulnerability and through the
    stormy oceans of emotion filled conspiracies you seek the treasure that has been hidden for centuries.

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    I can imagine these rocky cliffs as obstacles within ones life and the battle in this stanza of emotional tug-of-war.

    Only in the mysterious house located in the inner self where you always seem to lose yourself.

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    The house can represent our mind, REM sleep.. Our beliefs that are hidden in the everyday b.s. But in this house we find solace in peace, beautifully done.

    The clues are placed on the walls of many doors as you try to find answers through the labyrinth of broken dreams and metaphors.

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    Wow what an overall completion of the poem, it brings everything together thus far. The labyrinth of broken dreams. It's as if you're trying to piece these dreams together within the house (your mind) and figure out where to go which road to take, how to become who you truly are. Powerful stanza.

    Find yourself before anyone else for it is up to you to seek the truth behind reality's lie, it is up to you to find the passage written that foretells the rest of your life.

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    This can be something kind of like a message you wrote to yourself. Where you can look upon it every morning when you wake. In a it's kind of like a sense of panic, where you are telling yourself very strongly to discover yourself before someone else does.. Maybe in fear of them controlling you to live your life the way you don't want. I am unsure here but that is how I took it. I feel it's a plea to yourself to not believe the others around you but to look within yourself to what it is you want.

    Do this and you will never have to live a masked life but one that is free and beautiful no matter the ugliness displayed inside...

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    True. Your poems always have a message with them something I love because it helps me look into myself to try and evaluate myself and understand where I am in life what I can do to help my life and the ones I love.. So thank you for always giving me something to look forward to when you write a poem..

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Wow!!!! This is so incredible,I felt as though I was walking through that dream with you and getting lost in the passages of myself, seeing things" through the blind eyes of fate"this entire poem, in reading it,I felt as though I had been walking through a world so real it was more real than the waking world, yet it could all crumble and fall at any moment.I love that you've used actual dream symbology (the house being the self) so incredibly stunning, thank you :-)

  • 10 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Amazing..... The poem and perhaps even your dream....

    Only in the mysterious house located in the inner self where you always seem to lose yourself.
    I can relate to this line so much.... Love the poem