Comments : Genesis

  • 10 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This is such a great message. It kind of goes with what the world is nowadays honestly. We keep blaming others for our own problems and in that it causes the world to fight when instead we can choose to live in peace. This has very clever wording within it. When a child is lost within adulthood that's where issues can happen. You were in denial and now the sorrow as cone to the for front. Facing our fears is difficult and not a lot of people can do it on their own, but the message is strong. The world will make you feel alone and you cannot do anything to save yourself. Overall excellent write!

  • 10 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    And....................... Yes, you are correct, Your hugs are far bigger than mine.. this write proves it! :-)

    Love this piece!!