Comments : Turbulent state of mind

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I agree with Senyru - I too read this with such a short and choppy pace to the poem that it was a really fun poem to read. I was also thinking back to my chemistry classes, or science classes, with all the different terms used and how they all seemed so hard to remember at the time! It reminded me of those classes so much!!

    Excellent little poem, very clever to use what you had learned in school, and put it into this poem, well done!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Thanks saffie!!!I won't lie,I had such fun writing this one even though it related to school stuff ha ha, it was just fun to write about something other than the usual love/nature/depression poems :-P