What an intense emotional poem.I love how you've taken a cliche"bang my head against a brick wall"and made it completely new and owned it"another brick wall bangs against my head" a brilliant, subtle use of personification which creates a really intense (though I admit slightly humerous, or maybe it's my distorted humour) image, so incredible, again,a strong, daring piece that grips the reader from start to finish.

Beautiful, 5/5