by Beautiful Soul
Thank you for taking part, I love this a lot. The emotions are understandable and clear. The metaphors of space are actuality well used here, and not a lot of people will be able to see the hidden message (intentional or not). That space can be known for an extremely lonely place and this person on earth is feeling that way as well. It is a great connection honestly. A lot of people will be able to connect to the emotions you speak of because everyone at one time has been lonely at least once in their life. So it holds a personal touch as well. |
I absolutely adored this poem on so many levels, this was actually the one I voted for! I am very big on astronomy so this immediately caught my attention. |
by uttAm
A thousand thanks to both of you James and Crystal for your lovely comments..... |
by Jyoti Rawat
Your first four lines, |
by Meena Krish
You have brought out the hopelessness of a lonely soul |
by Em
Very powerful words and a lot of people will be able to reach out to this poem as loneliness is unfortunately a very widespread thing. It gripped me and left me wanting to read more so well done |