by Beautiful Soul
There is so so much going for this poem. First of all the form is tough but you mastered it perfectly. I LOVE the rhyming because it does not seem forced at all and does well to stay with the flow of the poem. Second of all the title is unique because I don't think I've ever seen a poem written about voodoo dolls :) very clever. The first stanza/part seems to be about making the voodoo doll. Again there is another clever part here and that is, you are the voodoo doll. Putting yourself in that situation is not an easy write but you did well. You did an excellent job with the prompts too, though they were easy, putting them altogether in one poem was not easy at all. |
by gumshuda
Ohhh... This was your poem. I loved it. Each and every line perfect. I remember it was hard to choose which poem I wanted to vote..... |
by Baby Rainbow
Wow!! The poems coming out from the prompts and challenges recently are really high standard! It is amazing to see the progress of them, and the use of the prompts given here is really quite impressive. |
Holy guacamole! |
A really awesome, sad yet somewhat fun poem to read.I love the unique subject matter, capturing the point of view of a magical yet inanimate object is something you don't see often, but you executed this flawlessly, strong emotion, the format is rather clever, creates am almost doll-like shape, an ingenious piece all round.5/5 |