Thoughts
by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX Oct 8, 2014
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Everybody has thoughts everybody has problems everyone has issues but yet no one speaks about them we keep things bottled up inside until we explode. some people all they think about is lust and sex and temptation there's so many weird things going on in this world that we just don't stop to breathe man turning on man fighting and killing for what so we can try to understand things will get better that's never going to happen. they say when a person dies that their souls move on and will be remembered and they will never be forgotten. so what if you're not dead but you feel dead everyday I feel worthless pathetic lost don't feel like I have a reason anymore the one important thing in my life rather lie to me then tell me the truth rather think about cheating on me than love me what's the morals of that what do you do when you feel like you're already dead? You end everything. |
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10 years ago
Let me first say this: this is not a poem it's a paragraph. Now that we have stated the obvious let me start with what I like in this poem: I love the message you gave off in this paragraph it was very blunt very in your face but truthful so don't worry about that sweetie. What I didn't like was the obvious fact it wasn't in a poem form, didn't have capitulation, nor the proper grammar like commas where they needed to be, but besides that like I said I loved the message that it gave off and I love the last sentence in this because we are the end since we are the beginning of every chaos made to man. Nice job
-Mori
