by Beautiful Soul
First: This is a great stanza to kick start the poem. The wordplay here is honestly great. The moon is great because that is what controls the waves, so could you say it was the full moon that woke you up? Using nature as an emotional poem I like. The first line here interests me a lot. You could say that the darkness was in your nightmares and that startled you awake. Autumn is a great touch as well because we are in autumn now! |