This is great!

I love that it has a sense of humour mixed in with the serious thoughts raised about life, and the way the world is.

It is quite thought-provoking too, making the reader questions their own beliefs and the answers that come to their mind while reading this.

I really do think you have a talent for putting a good beat to your words, this poem flowed so smoothly and I really enjoyed reading it.

I also like the use of the repetition about the "drinking a little more"

I think this reminds me of a country type song that I can picture in a movie scene!!

I think your title is a perfect fit too, it does really give you thought for reasoning, and the humour in the poem lies within the imagery of a person consuming too much alcohol, while trying to think deeply about this reasoning.

Great job. Keep on writing more please :)

Humorous yet with a sense of sadness too. Alcohol is all too often used as a crutch to get us through life.

I love the way the thoughts flow as they would if a few drinks had been consumed. The random questions that always seem so important at this time.

A well constructed write that really makes me feel 'in the moment'.

Thanks

Humorous yet with a sense of sadness too. Alcohol is all too often used as a crutch to get us through life.

I love the way the thoughts flow as they would if a few drinks had been consumed. The random questions that always seem so important at this time.

A well constructed write that really makes me feel 'in the moment'.

Thanks

Humorous yet with a sense of sadness too. Alcohol is all too often used as a crutch to get us through life.

I love the way the thoughts flow as they would if a few drinks had been consumed. The random questions that always seem so important at this time.

A well constructed write that really makes me feel 'in the moment'.

Thanks