Comments : Shadowing Humans!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Brilliant!!

    The idea behind the poem is very clever, very unique. It is so true in what you say, and it holds a lot of meaning to the world, and how children only learn to copy the adults in the world, who really only copied the adults in their world as they grew.

    I love the idea of humans being shadows, instead of the cliche black shadow that is on the ground and created by light.

    I thin it was a clever way to start the poem, by describing something that we did not know yet, but it held a mystery in that first stanza which we want to find out more about, and so we read on further where all is revealed as the poem comes to and end.

    Really loved this idea, and the play on words with the shadow humans is awesome!

    Very unique poem!

  • 10 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Very creative, love it!!! :D 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Em

    Wow very powerful stuff. I love how you have shown how we all judge each other from when we are born but that we shouldn't because the one person that can is our maker. Well written. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by gumshuda

    Very very creative..... I love this poem.

    I love this line the most...
    .shadowing humans as human shadows!

    Wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing.