by Kota the Unheard Oct 13, 2014
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Lost, |
This poem is beautiful! Being gay, I know what this loneliness you describe is like, and it's disheartening to be left alone and forgotten. I wasn't going to comment, but the last verse really hit me. The rest of it was great, but the last verse was effective in driving home the notion of loneliness you were trying to evoke. |
Thank you for writing back and giving some advice I greatly appreciate it. Truly. You hang in there too. |