Trying...

The fourth line says "i'll" every other instance of this is capitalized so to continue your flow and style you should probably capitalize this one too - unless of course you wanted to draw emphasis to this particular instance as in you feel you cannot try harder even though you say you will or as if this means more than anything else you say here (though I'm not leaning towards the second. Not with what I know about you. Not with who this is for. )

I truly enjoyed seeing this piece from you, it's just the kind of thing you needed out of your system, especially lately. I'm sorry things are not always easy to move on from, him especially, but you've done better than I would have

This is beautiful, I cried a little bit(I'm not kidding) I know how you feel, and trust me when I say you are not alone, keep up the excellent writing my friend, you are going places