Edge Of Darkness

This is the first time I've read a poem that flows perfectly
smooth with spot on rhymes and sense. The imagery that
came along with too in my mind was moving too...beautifully sad.

Walking out of someone's life, is not always a bad thing, it rises the question of why you would, when you have loved someone for so long. Here I see this character can no longer take the pain that this person put them through and in that they must walk away, but it seems the allure of suicide is strong within this, yes pain and depression are very real aspects to any factor of suicide, and no one can truly understand inner pain, but is it worth it? Some will say yes and others no. It depends on the perspective. It is also true that the pain will end. Anyways, loved the simple rhyming here, it makes the poem flow well here, and the message is strong. As it brings out a point of getting hurt and not being able to take it anymore. 5/5

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This is such a sad write...

The imagery I got from this piece is overwhelming...

I picture a girl/woman/boy/man just sitting
Mulling over everything awful in their life,
As if these were the brief last few minutes
Left for them to live, before they make their
Final decision...
which has been emotionally/ physically
beaten into them, as their only way out :(

So sad