Depression

by VYXSIN   Oct 16, 2014


Dark takes over
all consuming
no way back
stuck forever
no where to go
decending deeper
becoming darker
absolute silence
no company
only black
no company
no love
no return
stuck forever
all consuming
dark takes over

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  • 10 years ago

    by -Choke-On-MY-Halo-

    First off I love that it was placed in the center format to perfection (because few poets can manage that since we tend to write really ellaborate poetry and it doesn't look right), secondly I think the first word in the poem should've been "Darkness" since it is more better sounding in my opinion, thirdly I love that it's an explanation of what Depression is. Lastly the wording while simple it explains alot great read 5/5

    -Mori

  • 10 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    Captures the depth of depression really well. I love the lyrical flow and the way it draws you down both visually and verbally.
    Very well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Flawlessly dark, full of the depth of depression which is consuming you. You detailed it so vividly and what an amazing rhyming sequence.