Flawlessly dark, full of the depth of depression which is consuming you. You detailed it so vividly and what an amazing rhyming sequence.

Captures the depth of depression really well. I love the lyrical flow and the way it draws you down both visually and verbally.
Very well done.

First off I love that it was placed in the center format to perfection (because few poets can manage that since we tend to write really ellaborate poetry and it doesn't look right), secondly I think the first word in the poem should've been "Darkness" since it is more better sounding in my opinion, thirdly I love that it's an explanation of what Depression is. Lastly the wording while simple it explains alot great read 5/5

-Mori