What a wonderful poem imposing a meaningful and wonderful message.
Sometimes we do write poems restricting ourselves with the rhyming, thesaurus, and many more things and the whole poem just turns cryptic and crap and sometimes we write something that is not us.......

This poem really does give a good message and definitely is an excellent poem.

Brilliant! What a great message, sometimes it's easy to get so caught up with finding a rhyme or trying to sound clever we forget to write from the heart and lose the true meaning of poetry.
Thanks :)

Haha. This is the perfect poem if I've ever read one. Going on my favorites.

Haha. This is the perfect poem if I've ever read one. Going on my favorites.

I would still love to master the flow you seem to have a talent for in your writing! There is always a beat to the lines and the words seem to just roll on your tongue which makes the poem very enjoyable!

I love the poem message and content, showing a simple poem about the complicated poems that are all too often over worded, filled with unnecessary descriptions or words that don't seem to connect to anything or add anything to the poem! I fall into this habit myself often, and put metaphors before meaning, which can make my poems cryptic toy readers!

I think many people on here will relate to this poem because we often understand our own cryptic work, and struggle to break down the cryptic words of others!

Great poem!

A simple message in a fabulous poem, well done :D