I love that this is so short and to the point. The contrast between both stanzas. One happy, one heartbroken. the wording, flow and feeling are perfect. </3

I lived this for so long with a certain poet on here. I never told her a dang thing about it, to worried what she would have thought at the time so in disappeared. Young back then. I love this poem because who can't relate to waking up to a dream of the person they love, it's heart wrenching. The way you penned the twob stanza was expertly. I'm very amazed.. I actually did this the last time I slept.so relatable