I have to say that this is one epic write!

When I read long poems my mind kinda wanders off a bit from what im reading.....it sure didn't happen here which considering what the piece is about is kinda funny, i literally couldn't stop reading!

I love the flow and the vocab choice was perfect!

A great write, if i could nominate this poem then i would because i think it should be highlighted!

The highs and lows of a love that takes so much over investment of ones inner self is a damning and addictive spell best broken. A heart touching poem for me

I don't know what to say to this other than wow, i've been afraid to post some of my more erotic ones, perhaps I may now.

Thank you so much for writing this