by ah satan 666 Oct 23, 2014
category :
Special events /
other poems
I happily lay between darkness and light, |
by Baby Rainbow
This really is incredible! |
by Beautiful Soul
Natasha. This visual alone makes it nomination worthy, I wish people would notice this piece more. Doing it in the view point of a pumpkin first off is unique and creative and second off does a great job with the recent times as it is almost Halloween or all hallows eve heh. I loved the details you used as they are spot on, and they bring the pumpkin to life honestly. The feelings you give here make the pumpkin almost afraid of Halloween and almost know what is going to happen, as the cutting of it's inside takes place. But know that with it, it does become more alive with the glow of the candle and a new face. As I said this poem's attention to detail is outstanding and each stanza is it's own image and story and emotion. Beautiful work hon. 5/5 |
by Liz
I think this year may be the year, lol. Especially after reading this =P |
by Liz
Ah! I love this. First I was, like, is this poem in the right category? Lol. Then I kept reading and it's just incredible. I have never carved a pumpkin myself, but this makes me want to. =P |
by ah satan 666
Oh no :O ... |