by Beautiful Soul
Trophies I feel are definitely overrated but this poem holds a lot of sadness overall. It seems like the narrative is changing back and forth between you and this person who hurt you. Or a reader could read it like you are narriorting this persons life through their eyes. He holds your tears and screams captive, both of them going unheard. This person has held these for a long time, untouched by other people, and knowing he has them, brings him joy, a sick feeling by everyone else but himself. Every time he smiles there is a memory that comes back to you, causing you pain that you are trying to forget or have forgotten. This person robbed you of living a happy childhood, and he takes pride in that, much to you lr depose. Great write. |
I will comment on later on this poem since it's just so beautiful and for that alone I nominated the poem . |
My stolen comforts nest |