Re: the girl with a tale that's bigger than her hands

by Saerelune   Oct 28, 2014


"In time, her tale grew old,
her hands grew old,
pages she gathered from the sidewalk
tucking the future far behind."

And in time, you realise,
your eyes are much like your mother's,
albeit a bit smaller - dark and harsh-lined,
hiding the artwork of concern
that's splattered across your iris.

You realise your hands are starting to wrinkle,
barely at the quarter of your life,
and lavender-scented handcreams
are becoming more familiar,
from muffling your own mouth.

You realise that fate is a comedian,
breaking all the roads to your hometown
like a gecko's tail, KL nothing but a reminder
of the funerals, whilst you never quite bothered
to ask the web if geckos' tails grow back -

too busy asking fate for an explanation
for bringing a boy from that funeral town,
a thousand miles away, who keeps sailing away,
but has your heart beating in his hands
despite never quite touching them.

To her, KL is a funeral town, home was burnt down,
and you can't visit the soul whose arms
became your home, you can't hear him whisper
in your ear, and not be reminded of an end.

28-10-2014
5:01 PM

This is in reaction to an older poem of mine: "A tale bigger than a little girl's hands".

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  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Congratulations on your second win!

    I like the idea you gave this sequel, and I also appreciate the time difference between the original poem and the reply to that poem.

    Again, the poem is filled with really good metaphors which tell a touching story, really beautiful write. The funeral town is such powerful words that really linger behind with your readers! The ending in this poem is very moving!

    Another enjoyable read, glad you decided to share this.

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Haha.. It will be easier if you just posted it in your account. Though if you prefer to Pm, I will be happy either way.

  • 10 years ago

    by Everlasting

    For some reason, I continued thinking of "tail" when I read "tale." It's a ESL mistake.

    Do you still have that older poem in this site?

    • 10 years ago

      by Saerelune

      I could imagine because in the previous poem I did play around with tail/tale quite some bit, and I guess it slipped into this poem too. ;) I actually don't have it posted on this site anymore, but I can pm you if you want to.

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