Bear with the length...I think the cadence of my writing makes it read faster than it appears long. Enjoy, and help me end it properly, please. I kind of just left it...

"Besides, these flowers have pollen, the pedals have fallen

^ I think I just spotted a typo on that line... Pedals or petals?

Other than that... I am not sure what to suggest for finishing the story. I like it as it is. It was fun to read it. It wasn't that long. It was creative.