by Everlasting Oct 30, 2014
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
One long night... |
Lucero,amazed at the writing skills.Going through this one reminded me of the topic for a contest,you were suggesting.... |
by Meena Krish
Hahah...well done my dear. This is learning and poetry writing at the same time! I like how you have attached important words from study material to your emotions. It goes hand in had...well done!! |
by Jad
Lucero, I like the more biological side of this poem. A very creative and unique way to learn or memorize information for a test. The poem itself was flawless as usual. I like the apt description of learning and how it correlates to the lytic cycle. The poem also had a couple of scientific words in it, which I had to go look up, but that wasn't a negative at all. Just furthering my eduction. Other than having to stop to look up words, the flow was great through the poem and the message is clear as day although your metaphor is very unique and clever. |