Comments : Studying - The lytic Cycle

  • 10 years ago

    by Jad

    Lucero, I like the more biological side of this poem. A very creative and unique way to learn or memorize information for a test. The poem itself was flawless as usual. I like the apt description of learning and how it correlates to the lytic cycle. The poem also had a couple of scientific words in it, which I had to go look up, but that wasn't a negative at all. Just furthering my eduction. Other than having to stop to look up words, the flow was great through the poem and the message is clear as day although your metaphor is very unique and clever.

    Once again I find myself amazed at your work. I hope you continue to grow as a poet and as you grow your skill and maturity do as well. You have a tremendous gift and I am thankful I am able to read and enjoy that gift. Great job and keep writing!

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Hahah...well done my dear. This is learning and poetry writing at the same time! I like how you have attached important words from study material to your emotions. It goes hand in had...well done!!

  • 10 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Lucero,amazed at the writing skills.Going through this one reminded me of the topic for a contest,you were suggesting....
    You created one in a perfect flow.
    Well done !!!!