This poem is beautiful. It caught my complete attention in the very first line. I loved the complete poem especially the beginning.
Awesomely written.
Keep penning.

Judging comment;

Wow. This piece took my breath away so easily. I never thought a poem could compile so many every day things so perfectly vivid. It made them jump off the page and leave an impact or bring as much of the piece together as they did. I love the mention of poems and RPGs and just how well they were incorporated into this piece. The voice here is clear and comes through extremely well. The style is wonderful and the word choice was amazing.