Stutter

The flow to this poem is what really impressed me this week. There is nothing worse than trying to read a lengthy poem that has a very rough, or a non existent flow, but this poem really was easy to read and the rhyming throughout really matched the flow also, subtle and not forced. The message of the poem was portrayed well with the battle within oneself. Trying to move on from someone who has hurt you, perhaps beaten your confidence down, but this author shows they are not ready to give up and that they will be proud of who they are. The use of the stutter works well because it shows that despite having this struggle with words, their confidence is now growing and they managed to get the words out eventually. The ending was very powerful, comparing this worthless character to dust which only takes up a small part of the mind now, shows healing and moving on. Really good write.

Well this poem left me speechless!
The message of love lost I presume, but just wow!!!

The rhyme scheme in this was elegantly placed in areas that made is so incredibly unique to me. The flow had a rhythm, and that is difficult to do, when you take into consideration of the tone of message in this piece. I applaud Lady Nik for this piece here... The wording was tasteful and very creative. Powerful and well written piece this week!!

Congratulations on the win dear!!

Great poem. A lot of raw emotion expressed perfectly.

Oh I love this poem..... I am so so so much in love with it.... Glad it won.
I love how the sentences rhyme while I read it.... I've never read anything like that before.
I also love the ending of your poem.... Very powerful.

Especially the last sentence was wonderful...
A coward you stand,
less than a man, to silence a woman's tongue.

Wonderful write