Universal Truths

by JaneDoeWrites   Nov 4, 2014


He came
as an unexpected breeze
swiftly knotting my charcoal hair with
a terrifying magic, coaxing forth a wonder
and awe that wasn't easily ignored.

He drifted through his days
with an electrifying magnetism,
this unavoidable gravitational tow that
lured me inwardly with gradient motions;
unintentionally churning clusters
of anxious panic within myself-
where, if I were frank,
it frightened me...

so I kept you at a fingertipped distance.

And yet that was
before the beginning,
before his kiss ignited life
into this inextinguishable fire,
the satisfying burn I've so longed for...
that fantasizable familiarity.

You were as a breath
flooding my apathetic vessel
to it's brim, an overwash of serenity
that kissed the hands of my turmoil
before sending that familiar bleakness
on it's return to an abyss; gracefully
impregnating my mind with astronomical
thoughts.

Where peace was a place
I caught glimpses of but
frighteningly never ventured to...
until you held my hand.

And all the while,
throughout the chaos of my being,
he was a beacon illuminating the pathway
home when my tangents led me off to
starry depths.

It was then,
when stargazing suddenly meant
looking inwardly, instead of upward,
conveniently distorting the word
"forever" to be a seven-starred
painted picture immortally
showcased upon my
sternum.

However,
anxiety adamantly beckons
the question- is this tranquility simply
transitory? Is the peace I unearthed
within you a transparently labeled
capsule marked with an unwanted
expiration date?

When once, I shamefully vowed
that I'd never poison the well of
my inks with your name
any longer, and couldn't.

So however arresting it may be,
I push onward, diligently.

Because it is hope that drives
the car when exhaustion sleeps
soundly in the backseat, and I don't
mind traveling these winding celestial
roads that fate has laid ahead
for us.

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  • 10 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    This is absolutely awesome.
    A real journey through life exposing the innermost feelings that could so easily have overcome the writer yet allowed her in the end to rise above them and use her strength and courage to remain hopeful.

  • 10 years ago

    by Liz

    I am in love with this.

    It was then,
    when stargazing suddenly meant
    looking inwardly, instead of upward,
    ^
    This is so perfectly worded. Probably my favorite lines in the poem. Although I just loved all of it.

    conveniently distorting the word
    "forever" to be a seven-starred
    painted picture immortally
    showcased upon my
    sternum.
    ^
    This brought to my mind those cool looking mandala tattoos that are probably painful as all hell, but so beautiful. Again, prefect wording.

    Definitely one of my new favorite poems.

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Congratulations on winning the contest!

    I love the tone of your poem, and the angle you took! Your attitude throughout is amazing, and it really shows strength and determination to not be dragged down, to not let the past completely destroy you or capture your future either. Really uplifting poem!

    Amazing metaphors also, especially in the beginning of the poem when you are describing that other character!

    I also really like the word use of

    "so I kept you at a fingertipped distance"

    - never heard this used before and I think it worked extremely well here!

    when stargazing suddenly meant
    looking inwardly, instead of upward

    -- another amazing line - what a really powerful view to take, and inspiring message also to look more inside of ourselves for the answers and not on the outside!

    Really great direction you went with this, and I also loved your title choice, using that universe which you have used within the poem!

    Well done girl!