A unique variety of bitter insecurity
with subtle notes of ignorance, discourage, skepticism,
frustration, fear, envy, guilt and loneliness.

- I really like how you used this idea to show what was inside the bottle as apposed to just the liquid inside it. Creative wording.

Only the sweat nectar of wisdom, confidence, compassion,
understanding, splice solace, dignity, redemption and love remain.

- then the contrast that you use to compare the after action here, really well played!

You have a unique poem here, well titled and although it is long, it doesn't take too long to read it, and it flows really well. It is descriptive and holds a lot of imagery and metaphors.

Nice work

Just wow. I love this piece.
It's unique and I really like how you describe what's been put into the bottle.. Your feelings.