This poem really is outstanding. Your descriptions and metaphors are so unique, creative and so interesting!

There is a lot to take in from the poem, it has so much detail to it, a lot of imagery to grasp, but I do hope people will stop by the poem and give it the time it needs to read it, it is a very powerful poem.

I love the "form" of the poem, where you use that repeated line, which is also the title, and keep it the same until that last verse, it worked really well and made a big impact on the emotion of loneliness and depression.

Great write!

I was very really amazed by the metaphors within this poem, they created such vivid imagery that really kept an interesting scene painted in my mind whilst reading this poem. The author has used such unique descriptions to capture minor details and make them such a big part of the story. This poem is a very visual work of art, it has been constructed very well. The title was also repeated throughout the poem at the end of each stanza, which really drew each stanza together and kept each image connected to the tone of the poem, loneliness. Very well created poem.