Beautiful poem here, I really enjoyed the flow you created within it. It was a pleasure to read and it is always nice to read a poem which has such a beat to the words like this one has.

The idea is unique, and the title fits perfectly too, it caught my eye anyway!

Good descriptions. Well done.

This poem is so graceful and elegant. A somber, sorrowful poem, mixed with a nature scene metaphor that is just out of this world.

This poem makes me think of two lovers lost within the seasons of change.. One dying without the other and the other just floating along through life.

I got so caught up in the sorrow of this piece and yet each line I'm saying to myself "so beautiful, so very beautiful"

Nature mixed with sorrow/ metaphoric simplicity at its finest this week! Bravo!!!