Reality's Dream

by ShadowsEmber   Nov 5, 2014


It is a bit surreal when I think about it.
How someone who was not long ago just barely more than a familiar face.
How this enchanting heartache can be alleviated with the slightest of ease.
I never imagined this feeling of absolute transcendanceness,
that it was indeed more than a figment in my mind.
Like a dream, the amazing intensity of our souls coming together at last,
and I realize that you truly are reality's dream.
That you truly are,
MY dream.
A dream that has somehow continued after I awoke from my prodigious slumber.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Small elegance this week by ShadowsEmber!!

    The wording of love captured in a simple and yet effective format!

    The feelings are poured out: Perhaps a new love.. A dream turning into reality can bring such joy and then to craft it into a poem is beautifully displayed in this piece.

    I was captivated by this piece for its elegance, graceful simplicity and lovely word display!

    Very pretty piece this week by ShadowsEmber!

  • 10 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Just beautiful!

  • 10 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I like the wording of this poem, it holds a lot of power within it as well as the emotion of longing for that someone/something.

    great title choice too, and I like how you made it reality's dream, then MY dream, this worked well.

    Nice job.

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love this one Zoei, it is sweet. The word choice is unique, especially with your usual style. I like the way your voice is here, it is amazingly clear and as I said before sweet. - Wait a minute, who are you and what have you done to Zoei?!?!?!

    Anyway, awesome write.

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