I really don't know how should I illustrate the splendor of this breathtaking write. What a fantastic flow of lines and segments you have created. This write is very just.

The wording here in this write is just touching any other galaxy. I like the way you have mixed the sentimental thoughts with nature. The ending is I can say is quite amazing and sad with the sun sets.

This is my beloved segment:

Flushing cheeks,
And desperate sighs,
Exhausted shivers,
Those tempting blue eyes.

You are expressed the stream of love very clearly while it also holds the sadness within it in the end.

Remarkable write.