If I died today

by Cody   Nov 8, 2014


If I died today
Would anyone care
Would the woman I love so dearly
Feel my kisses blowing on the air

If I died today
Would anyone cry
Would my brothers look up to the heavens
And ask The Lord why

If I died today
Would anyone see
My beautiful children's faces
As their mom tells them the don't need me

If I died today
Would anyone pray
Would my church friends and family
Say Lord help us through this day

If I died today
Would anyone feel
Would my close friends in this life
Say man this just don't feel real

If I died today
My lasting words would be
Don't worry about me anymore
Cause Lord knows I'm free

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  • 9 years ago

    by Raven

    We all ask ourselves these questions.... You've done them just. Put them into a beautiful poem. Well done. Can't wait to read more.

  • 9 years ago

    by courtney

    Loved IT!!!

    • 9 years ago

      by Cody

      Thanks!

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Interesting. I love the tone of this though it doesnt exactly fit in this category (at least not to me) theres too much hope ajd love for it to be truly sad. Well penned.

    I am definitely a fan of your work

    • 10 years ago

      by Cody

      Thanks for all the positive comments and constructive criticism. Been a writer for many years now and just now putting my stuff out for others to read. Always been self conscious about it