Weight in My Eyes

A very powerful piece straight from the heart

This is a beautifully written poem and immensely powerful.

You have executed this write very justly. This is brilliant, must have been written by the profundity of your heart. This poem has driven me towards the great pain that you had suffered. I sense great grief in all lines.... Also I sense that the one who cared you a lot has departed. Heart-touching write. 5/5

Awwwhh! *Hand-to-heart-Gesture* This is so beautiful and sad! I wonder if you're speaking of one of your children? That is tough :(

You have seen me in my worst
and cheered on till I became the best,
picked me up from the deepest dirt
with a precious heart I've savored from birth,

So precious c:
A really heart-felt read.

Oh Meena.....SIGH.......This write is so beautiful and tragic at once. I always read poetry aloud and always two or three times and .....oh god you can write!

i'm pretty sure that I don't need to say the flow, word choice, emotion were perfectly balanced and for me, simply breathtaking.

it is such a relatable write and so very heartfelt I genuinly thankyou for sharing.

Dhan'yavada